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Children On Hooks

Stitching thread and mechanics help the children smile,

On each face, in this demented place, children have never been so vile.

Cannot say they have thoughts and dreams, although you can see their brain,

even if there no one would care, for they are all insane.

The children hanging on hooks, filing row by row,

In a horrible place, a terrified face, but their expresion will never show.

Cause of Doctor Bumby ``the puppetier`` puts their new doll face on,

no expression, all the same. down the chute. gone.

Where the chute leads to i truly cannot see,

Probrably to the infernal train, where he thinks all memories should be.

he runs the its schedule and its itinerary too,

But it can be stopped, it was all made by you.
had a nightmare one night after defeating Alice: the madness returns and most of this poem was in it. I didnt go back to bed for another hour but thought i should write it down. WARNING THERE ARE SPOILERS!!......i think...
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silverwolfygirl2 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014
it's fantastic!! great job with it! :iconokie2plz:
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chibikidz Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012
This is just amazing.
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Arxaime Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
God I love this it's most likely my favourite poem on DA!
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takory Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011
wow thank you. glad you like it :) woke up at 7 just to write it.
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Auramancer Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
lol i love this game...im addicted to it lol....and these little things creeped me out when i seen them for the first time! Love the ppoem!
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takory Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2011
lol thanks. i did not think they would that scary in this game.
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kaisash Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2011
I had fun with the game as well although kinda dissapointed with how they attached it to the first T.T on another note ^.^ It kind of contains spoilers, but it will only make sense after you beat it so... Great poem fits with the game perfectly.
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takory Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2011
lol thanks.
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LordOfDecay Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2011
“'But I don’t want to go among mad people,' Alice remarked.
'Oh, you can’t help that,' said the Cat. 'We’re all mad here. I’m mad. You’re mad.'
'How do you know I’m mad?' said Alice.
'You must be,” said the Cat. 'or you wouldn’t have come here.'”
I don't know what Lewis smoked, but I want that as well ;D
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DasT-Tsad Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2011
heh nice

so this came from a dream?....ur gonna end up like stephenie meyer if that keeps up O.o
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